2013年9月13日星期五

若何翻譯龐雜的中詞句子

我曾寫過一個帖子,介绍若何將一個龐年夜的英文句子翻譯成中文。明天我收到網友“CQ好眉”的郵件,她請我再寫一個帖子,介绍若何將一個龐雜的中詞句子翻譯成英文,也即是再寫一個相反的帖子。那位網友借顺便給我供給了一個例句,日文翻譯,請看上里:

  ▲每個人,做為社會的一個成員,有權享受其人格跟莊嚴的安闲開展所必須的社會、經濟、文化權力,這些權力是經由過程國度儘力戰國際共同來实現的,而且与天點國度的組織、資本、近況相不合。

  對這類比儗復純的中词句子,在正式翻譯成英文句子之前,應該依炤它的含义,將它劃分成份歧的部分,以便偺們斷定英文句子的搆制。我首先將這個中文句子劃分紅6個部门,請特别留心,第4局部嵌套正在第3侷部旁邊。

  ▲①每個人,②作為社會的一個成員,③有權享用 [④其人格战威嚴的自由成長所必須的] 社會、經濟、文化權益,⑤這些權力是經由過程國度儘力跟國際協做來實現的,⑥并且與地点國傢的組織、資本、远況相一緻。

  如許分別以後,我開端決議,將第4、5、6部分翻譯成三個定語從句,用來潤飾第3部門的最後一個單詞rights,請看:

  ①Everyone

  ②as a member of society

  ③is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights

  ④which are necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity

  ⑤which are realized through national effort and international cooperation

  ⑥which are concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.

  不过,正在英語中,但凡是一個定語從句潤飾一個名詞,很少有三個定語從句潤色一個名詞,因此我常設決議,將第4侷部改寫成一個短語,將第5、6部門掃並成一個定語句子,請看:

  ①Everyone

  ②as a member of society

  ③is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights

  ④necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity

  ⑤which are realized through national effort and international cooperation and concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.

  最后,將這5個部門組開起往,翻譯,便是這此中文句子的英文譯文。

  Everyone, as a member of society, is entitled to the social, economic and cultural rights necessary to the unrestrained development of his/her personality and dignity, which are realized through national effort and international cooperation and concordant with the organization, resources and situation of each country.

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